A Letter of Complaint

Supisara Kuenghakit
99/326 Setsiri Village Serithai Road
Kannayao District Bangkok Thailand 10230
Novermber 25, 2010

Dr. Roxy Pastello,
Academic Head of School
NIVA International School
Bangkok Thailand 10240

Dear Dr. Roxy:

Everytime students have to go to the school's toilet. The school provides one restroom for male and one for female. The school also provides two restrooms for male in second floor and one female. At the third floor, the school provides one restroom for male teacher near female teacher's restroom and the other side for female students. All of students complain that it is stinky.

For some students, especially girls, do not want to use the toilet because when the restrooms are stinky, they think that it is dirty. Besides, some of the toilets cannot flush too. I am afraid that if those students continuously do not use the toilet, their bladder might have problems. I think the school should fix the pipes' problem and furnish perfume in every restroom.

I would like the school to fix the problem as soon as possible.

Thank you for considering this matter.

Sincerely,
Supisara Kuenghakit

Persuasive Essay: Evaluating Advertisement

Do you want to look charming while you are havving dinner? Anoch, analogy of charms, is a refined tableware for mostly housewives and anyone whomloves luxury products. Anoch makes the customers to feel that they belong to the elite class because of using charm products. This essay will evaluate Anoch advertisement, a refined tableware.

There are positive aspects in this tableware advertisement. The advertiser repeats the word charm twice to make central idea of the advertisement that if the customers buy Anoch, they will be one of those charm people. The colors in this advertisement are perfect. A woman wears dark glossy gown which looks classe and for a man, he wears dark suit but still look high class because of his sliver necktie. They go out well with silver shiny tableware in a gorgeous red box to make the product standout from the background. The luxury font does help this advertisement even more  hi-so. A woman smiles when a man gives her silver shiny tableware. She seems to be more happy when she gets a tableware, not jewelry. The advertisement is shob appeal, elite group with a luxurious and glamorous lifestyle.

                There are negative sides of this advertisement too. It doesn’t mention the product’s price, which it may be expensive. The afvertiser makes customers feel they want to go to the store to check out the price. They also don’t mention the product’s details but they do tell a new opening place which is at Paragon 3^rd floor. The confusion is in the advertisement too. It’s not guarantee that if a man gives this product to his girlfriend or wife, she will be happy like a woman in the ad.

                This essay evaluated the advertisement of tableware, Anoch. Overall this ad is goodfor attracting people to stop and take a look for a few seconds, while reading the magazine. However, I think the advertiser should make a bigger logo to be impressed people’s eyes so that they can remember or seeing the logo in their mind when they are lokking for the store.

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